“You Wouldn’t Trust a Kindergartner to Drive You Around Town. So Why Would You Trust a Newbie Copywriter to Drive Profits Into Your Bank Account?”
You Wouldn’t. And That’s Why You’re About to Find Out Why Other Marketers Trust Me With Their Most Important Sales Letters… And Why You Should Too
Dear Fellow Marketer,
Stringing words together on a page like a sloppy word salad won’t impress your prospects. Nor will it put money in your pocket.
Instead, what you need is an attention-grabbing, high-response sales letter that gets your prospects to stop, read and buy.
And that’s exactly the kind of letter I’d like to put up on your site. But first, let me show you why it works like magic…
Think back to one of the first times you ever saw fireworks when you were a kid…
Maybe it was a warm night on the 4th of July. You sat in the cool grass with your friends, laughing and talking with excited anticipation. You chattered about swimming, summer vacations, baseball and everything else that filled your carefree days.
Then suddenly…
Ffffffffffffffffffft… BOOM!
Your head snaps up just in time to catch the first fireworks exploding in dazzling color.
Heads up…
Eyes widen…
Mouths drop open…
You and your friends don’t utter another word about vacations or swimming or baseball. In between bursts of fireworks you can hear the “ooohs and ahhhs” rolling over the crowd. And you sit there in rapt attention like a guard at Buckingham Palace.
There’s nothing that could rip your attention away from the show. You don’t take your eyes off the smoky sky until the last firework fades away.
So what does this have to do with you making a lot of money?
Just this: Fireworks to children are like the…
Attention-Getting, Eye-Opening, Heart-Stopping Tactics I Use to Persuade Your Hardest Prospects to Crack Open Their Wallets!
I call them “sales copy fireworks” -- or “copy works” for short.
These are the little things I drop into your sales letter to make it POP. This includes great headlines to stop busy prospects dead in their tracks, emotional hooks that reel your prospects in… and a call to action they can’t ignore.
And just like real fireworks, your prospects won’t be able to rip their attention away from your sales page. They’ll sit in front of their monitors with wide eyes, open mouths and a credit card in hand. They won’t be able to click away (much less look away) until they click your “buy now” button!
That’s exactly what you’ll get when you let me work some of my “copy works” magic into your next sales letter. You’ll get results. Real results that add more customers to your list and put more cash in your account.
Listen…
If you’ve ever had tumbleweeds blowing through your empty inbox when you expected a flood of sales, then you’ll know why having a high-response sales letter is so important!
And if you’ve not yet had that experience, just think back to a time when you were disappointed…
Maybe you were a small child who didn’t get what you wanted for Christmas. Perhaps as an adult your best friend forgot your birthday. Or maybe you had high hopes for meeting some goal and you landed flat on your face instead.
It hurts. And that’s the same kind of “punched in the gut” disappointment you’ll get if your sales letter flops.
But you don’t have to feel that way -- not as long as I stand by ready to create your high-response sales letter.
Entrust your sales letter in my expert hands – I have ten years of experience writing dozens of profitable sales letters -- and…
Your inbox will be singing a sweet tune as one sales notification after another rushes in!
Now, if you’ve read or even skimmed this far then you already know my sales copy works.
So that leads to your next question –
“How Much?”
For you – just $500.
But there’s a catch.
The only way you can claim that rock-bottom price is you agree to let me use your sales letter in my portfolio.
You see, I’ve done a lot of “behind the scenes” sales copy work with some big names. I’d commit business suicide if I even hinted about who I’ve worked with, much less if I put their ads in my portfolio. Seriously, they don’t want anyone to know I write their copy.
That’s why I need your sales letter. And I’m willing to give you the same “fireworks” copy I do for everyone else – but at a steep discount – if you let me add it to my portfolio.
Look...
You're guaranteed to get my best work because I intend to proudly show it off to the world!
Fair enough?
Here’s What You Need to Do Next Before Someone Else Beats You To It...
This is first come, first served, so PM me right now. Tell me a bit about your product and your niche (a few lines will do).
If I agree to accept your project, I’ll send you a questionnaire to complete and you can send me the $500 fee.
It’s as easy as that for you to get a high-converting sales letter created by a known marketing expert.
But hurry and PM me right now, because this offer is only available to a handful of people who contact me soon.
I look forward to receiving your PM!
Rebecca “Becky” Hagel
P.S. You can trust me: I have a solid seven-year history on the Warrior Forum and a ten-year history working with a whole host of legendary experts and JV partners – go ahead and Google it for proof. Then come back here fast to PM me before my schedule fills up.
P.P.S. Need more proof? Check out the letters I've written for others. Here are five awesome samples -- including examples of some kick-ass storytelling selling that will knock your socks off:
http://www.bhagel.com/copywriting_samples.pdfPM me now!
