â€śYou Wouldnâ€™t Trust a Kindergartner to Drive You Around Town. So Why Would You Trust a Newbie Copywriter to Drive Profits Into Your Bank Account?â€ť
You Wouldnâ€™t. And Thatâ€™s Why Youâ€™re About to Find Out Why Other Marketers Trust Me With Their Most Important Sales Lettersâ€¦ And Why You Should Too
Dear Fellow Marketer,
Stringing words together on a page like a sloppy word salad wonâ€™t impress your prospects. Nor will it put money in your pocket.
Instead, what you need is an attention-grabbing, high-response sales letter that gets your prospects to stop, read and buy.
And thatâ€™s exactly the kind of letter Iâ€™d like to put up on your site. But first, let me show you why it works like magicâ€¦
Think back to one of the first times you ever saw fireworks when you were a kidâ€¦
Maybe it was a warm night on the 4th of July. You sat in the cool grass with your friends, laughing and talking with excited anticipation. You chattered about swimming, summer vacations, baseball and everything else that filled your carefree days.
Your head snaps up just in time to catch the first fireworks exploding in dazzling color.
Mouths drop openâ€¦
You and your friends donâ€™t utter another word about vacations or swimming or baseball. In between bursts of fireworks you can hear the â€śooohs and ahhhsâ€ť rolling over the crowd. And you sit there in rapt attention like a guard at Buckingham Palace.
Thereâ€™s nothing that could rip your attention away from the show. You donâ€™t take your eyes off the smoky sky until the last firework fades away.
So what does this have to do with you making a lot of money?
Just this: Fireworks to children are like theâ€¦
Attention-Getting, Eye-Opening, Heart-Stopping Tactics I Use to Persuade Your Hardest Prospects to Crack Open Their Wallets!
I call them â€śsales copy fireworksâ€ť -- or â€ścopy worksâ€ť for short.
These are the little things I drop into your sales letter to make it POP. This includes great headlines to stop busy prospects dead in their tracks, emotional hooks that reel your prospects inâ€¦ and a call to action they canâ€™t ignore.
And just like real fireworks, your prospects wonâ€™t be able to rip their attention away from your sales page. Theyâ€™ll sit in front of their monitors with wide eyes, open mouths and a credit card in hand. They wonâ€™t be able to click away (much less look away) until they click your â€śbuy nowâ€ť button!
Thatâ€™s exactly what youâ€™ll get when you let me work some of my â€ścopy worksâ€ť magic into your next sales letter. Youâ€™ll get results. Real results that add more customers to your list and put more cash in your account.
If youâ€™ve ever had tumbleweeds blowing through your empty inbox when you expected a flood of sales, then youâ€™ll know why having a high-response sales letter is so important!
And if youâ€™ve not yet had that experience, just think back to a time when you were disappointedâ€¦
Maybe you were a small child who didnâ€™t get what you wanted for Christmas. Perhaps as an adult your best friend forgot your birthday. Or maybe you had high hopes for meeting some goal and you landed flat on your face instead.
It hurts. And thatâ€™s the same kind of â€śpunched in the gutâ€ť disappointment youâ€™ll get if your sales letter flops.
But you donâ€™t have to feel that way -- not as long as I stand by ready to create your high-response sales letter.
Entrust your sales letter in my expert hands â€“ I have ten years of experience writing dozens of profitable sales letters -- andâ€¦
Your inbox will be singing a sweet tune as one sales notification after another rushes in!
Now, if youâ€™ve read or even skimmed this far then you already know my sales copy works.
So that leads to your next question â€“
For you â€“ just $500.
But thereâ€™s a catch.
The only way you can claim that rock-bottom price is you agree to let me use your sales letter in my portfolio.
You see, Iâ€™ve done a lot of â€śbehind the scenesâ€ť sales copy work with some big names. Iâ€™d commit business suicide if I even hinted about who Iâ€™ve worked with, much less if I put their ads in my portfolio. Seriously, they donâ€™t want anyone to know I write their copy.
Thatâ€™s why I need your sales letter. And Iâ€™m willing to give you the same â€śfireworksâ€ť copy I do for everyone else â€“ but at a steep discount â€“ if you let me add it to my portfolio.
You're guaranteed to get my best work because I intend to proudly show it off to the world!
Hereâ€™s What You Need to Do Next Before Someone Else Beats You To It...
This is first come, first served, so PM me right now. Tell me a bit about your product and your niche (a few lines will do).
If I agree to accept your project, Iâ€™ll send you a questionnaire to complete and you can send me the $500 fee.
Itâ€™s as easy as that for you to get a high-converting sales letter created by a known marketing expert.
But hurry and PM me right now, because this offer is only available to a handful of people who contact me soon.
I look forward to receiving your PM!
Rebecca â€śBeckyâ€ť Hagel
P.S. You can trust me: I have a solid seven-year history on the Warrior Forum and a ten-year history working with a whole host of legendary experts and JV partners â€“ go ahead and Google it for proof. Then come back here fast to PM me before my schedule fills up.
P.P.S. Need more proof? Check out the letters I've written for others. Here are five awesome samples -- including examples of some kick-ass storytelling selling that will knock your socks off:http://www.bhagel.com/copywriting_samples.pdf
PM me now!